Week 4 Topic 2: Writing Concise Sentences In this discussion, you will work on

Week 4 Topic 2: Writing Concise Sentences
In this discussion, you will work on

Week 4 Topic 2: Writing Concise Sentences
In this discussion, you will work on writing concise sentences.
Initial Post (due by 11:59 p.m. on Friday)
Select a sentence from any of your own prior writing that could be made more concise. This could be writing you have submitted or posted in discussions in this class or it could be from another context.
Post the original sentence.
Revise the sentence to make it more concise. Be sure to indicate your revisions in bold type.
Using what you have learned about sentences, demonstrate informed and deliberate choices about sentence structure in your revised sentence.
Demonstrate the grammar and writing skills covered in previous weeks.